"Rest assured I have a steady stream of income coming from various sources every month, some of which are not detailed in the bank statements provided"
Subject: Rental Application - Financial Statement Review
"This article reworded multiple times by Jasper AI. Edited by SHiNER The Human. Just tryin to get the tone right."
-SHiNER The Human
Version 1: (by me)
I have a few more statements coming (see attached). I think May is missing but the overall result is I earn and spend more money than most of your potential renters. I am your best bet for ontime payments and long term rental. Plus I am not young or foolish or going to have 6 plus people living here. There will be me and my computer, my printers and a few clients per month. Please be assured I have over $80,000 per year sales thru my business. Not all profit, but enough to pay $24,000 per year in rent. I can easily pay $2000 per month rent. I love the home and will happily sign a 1 or even 2 year lease. I look forward to your perusal of the following income and bank statements and please be aware that I have money under my mattress, too. Thank you for your time.
PS, I am starting to expand my online presence with Artificial Intelligence."
The Artificial Intelligence Write-Off
Both Jasper and Lex had issues.
I shared the email I wrote with each one of them and here's what they said.
"Your draft has a lot of important points but it could be restructured and simplified to be more effective and professional. The tone of an email to a potential landlord should typically be formal and respectful. It is also important to maintain a positive tone and focus on the strengths that make you a reliable tenant. Here's a revised version of your email..."
-LEX
I hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing to address your concern regarding my financial status, as I understand the importance of trust and assurance in this potential landlord-tenant relationship. I believe it is in our mutual interest for you to have a clear view of my financial situation and capabilities, which more than qualify me as a reliable tenant.
In the past five years, I've achieved remarkable strides in improving my financial health. After recovering from a major surgery, I focused my energy on creating a successful business from the ground up, while simultaneously reducing my outstanding debts substantially. My credit rating has jumped from under 600 to over 700 as a direct result of these efforts.
I have an annual business revenue surpassing $80,000, with a respectable portion serving as profit. It allows me to comfortably afford an annual rent of $24,000. While it may seem like there is more money going out than coming in at various times, these are planned investments in infrastructure, equipment, and resources aimed at the growth and expansion of my business.
Rest assured I have a steady stream of income coming from various sources every month, some of which are not detailed in the bank statements provided. Besides the business, I have income from personal investments and have embraced the digital economy – including investments in cryptocurrencies. Kindly understand that any information related to my personal or business accounts not shared with you remains private, unless required by financial institutions or verified stakeholders.
I'm confident that I bring a stable income, good credit, and responsible behaviour to the table, all of which make me an ideal prospective tenant for your property. I maintain a quiet lifestyle and the premises will be used primarily for my living and minor business activities, hosting only a handful of client meetings each month.
Please find attached, the necessary financial statements for your review [or mention documents will be sent separately]. Keep in mind that there is one from May which is yet to be included but will follow shortly. In comparison to potential renters, my earnings and expenditure patterns reflect my strong financial management skills.
The property you've advertised has captured my interest and I can see it serving as a comfortable home for myself and a serene workspace for my business. I am not only capable of affording the rent, but I am also committed to maintaining the property as if it were my own. I am amenable to signing a one or even two-year lease, indicating my desire for a stable, long-term tenancy.
As a mature and responsible tenant, I intend to respect the property, reducing the risk of damage and wear often associated with larger households or younger tenants. With my lifestyle and business type, you don't have to worry about excessive traffic or noise disturbances.
Lastly, as technology evolves, so does my business. I am currently working on expanding my online presence by incorporating Artificial Intelligence. This is to reassure you that I am constantly on the lookout for growth and sustainability, a philosophy I uphold not just in my professional life, but in my personal life as well.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review my application. Should you need any more information, or have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me. I look forward to potentially starting a landlord and tenant relationship with you.
Best regards,[LEX]
Great job LEX!!!!
But you didn't get the email from the potential landlord.
Jasper
Jasper didn't even critique. Just gave me a revised edit.
Dear [Landlord's Name],
I hope this email finds you well. I am reaching out to discuss my rental application for [property address]. Firstly, I want to express my gratitude for taking the time to thoroughly review my financial statements. I understand your concerns regarding my spending habits and want to provide some clarification.
Over the past five years, I have made significant strides in improving my financial situation. After undergoing a liver transplant, I diligently paid off a substantial amount of debt, primarily consisting of interest payments. This experience has shaped my approach towards credit, leading me to rely more on my own savings and occasional assistance from trusted friends rather than traditional banking methods.
It's important to note that the provided bank statements only offer a glimpse into my financial activities. I hold additional cash reserves, which I consider a safeguard against unforeseen circumstances such as a bank collapse. While I respect your thoroughness, I kindly request that you refrain from making any assumptions or judgments based solely on the information provided.
During the past five years, I have successfully transitioned from being deeply in debt with a credit rating below 600 to nearly eliminating my debts and significantly improving my credit score, which now stands above 700. I have established a steady monthly income stream and have actively managed my expenses. Part of my financial strategy includes investing in cryptocurrencies, which occasionally contribute to paying off outstanding debts.
Please understand that details regarding my cryptocurrency accounts and investment portfolio remain private. I value my financial privacy and, like anyone, wish to protect my personal information.
In addition to my personal finances, I am also the owner of a business that I started from scratch. Although it has only been incorporated for three and a half years, I have been steadily investing in its growth by expanding infrastructure and acquiring necessary equipment. As a result, there may be instances where the funds flowing out exceed those coming in. However, please be assured that I am diligently building a sustainable business model, and my financial records reflect my commitment to long-term success.
I would like to emphasize that my business accounts are confidential unless required by a bank or shareholders, of which I currently have none. The income and bank statements attached to this email demonstrate my financial stability and the capability to meet my obligations promptly. Furthermore, these documents highlight my ability to afford the monthly rent comfortably.
With an annual sales figure of over $80,000 through my business, I can confidently commit to paying a monthly rent of $2,000. I genuinely admire your property and envision it as the perfect space for my work, which primarily involves me, my computer, printers, and occasional client meetings.
Rest assured, if selected as a tenant, I am more than willing to sign a lease agreement for one or even two years. Additionally, I am excited to inform you that I am expanding my online presence by incorporating Artificial Intelligence into my business, which will further contribute to its growth and success.
I sincerely appreciate your time and consideration in evaluating my application. If you require any further information or have additional questions, please do not hesitate to reach out. I remain enthusiastic about the possibility of calling [property address] my new home.
Thank you once again for your attention.
Warm regards,
[JASPER]
Great, Jasper! But you didn't read the email I got!
The Email I Got
Rewrites!!!
(I showed both the A.I. the email that said "monst".)
Lex said:
"In terms of the complexity or reading level of Shamim's email, it doesn't necessarily reflect their ability to understand more complex sentences or ideas. It's possible they were in a rush or didn't proofread their email."
-Lex
"THX, Lex!!!"
-SHiNER The Human
Lex Tries Again
Thank you for your reply. I understand, and would like to ease your concern about my income sources.
Before starting my business five years ago, I had debt and a low credit rating. I'm proud to say that today my credit rating is over 700 and I've significantly lowered my debt.
My business makes over $80,000 a year, and even with investments back into my business and some cash purchases not showing in the bank statements, I comfortably afford my living expenses, including a $2,000 monthly rent.
Apart from my business income, I also make earnings from personal investments and cryptocurrencies. For privacy reasons, this income is not shown in the provided bank statements.
My aim is to be a long-term tenant, and I'm ready to sign a one or even two-year lease. As a dedicated business owner, I spend most of my time working quietly at home and have occasional client meetings.
The future also looks promising – I'm expanding my business by including digital technologies like Artificial Intelligence.
I hope this explanation helps. Please review the attached financial statements for more information. If there's anything else you need to know, feel free to ask. I'm looking forward to potentially renting from you.
Best,[Lex]
Jasper Tries Again
Subject: Regarding My Rental Application for [Property Address]
Dear [Landlord's Name],
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to reach out to discuss my rental application for [property address]. Firstly, I want to express my gratitude for taking the time to thoroughly review my financial statements. I understand your concerns regarding my spending habits and would like to provide some clarification.
Over the past five years, I have made significant progress in improving my financial situation. After undergoing a liver transplant, I diligently paid off a substantial amount of debt, mainly interest payments. This experience has shaped my approach towards credit, leading me to rely more on my savings and occasional help from trusted friends rather than traditional banking methods.
Please note that the provided bank statements only offer a glimpse into my financial activities. I also hold additional cash reserves as a precaution against unforeseen circumstances, such as a bank collapse. While I appreciate your thoroughness, I kindly request that you refrain from making assumptions or judgments solely based on the information provided.
During the past five years, I successfully transitioned from being in considerable debt with a credit score below 600 to nearly eliminating my debts and significantly improving my credit score, which now stands above 700. I have established a steady monthly income stream and have actively managed my expenses. As part of my financial strategy, I occasionally invest in cryptocurrencies, which help in paying off outstanding debts.
Please understand that details regarding my cryptocurrency accounts and investment portfolio remain private. I value my financial privacy and, like anyone, wish to protect my personal information.
In addition to my personal finances, I am the owner of a business that I started from scratch. Although it has only been incorporated for three and a half years, I have been steadily investing in its growth by expanding infrastructure and acquiring necessary equipment. As a result, there may be instances where the funds flowing out exceed those coming in. However, please be assured that I am diligently building a sustainable business model, and my financial records reflect my commitment to long-term success.
I would like to emphasize that my business accounts are confidential unless required by a bank or shareholders, of which I currently have none. The attached income and bank statements demonstrate my financial stability and capability to meet my obligations promptly. Furthermore, these documents highlight my ability to comfortably afford the monthly rent.
With an annual sales figure of over $80,000 through my business, I can confidently commit to paying a monthly rent of $2,000. I genuinely admire your property and envision it as the perfect space for my work, which primarily involves me, my computer, printers, and occasional client meetings.
Rest assured, if selected as a tenant, I am more than willing to sign a lease agreement for one or two years. Additionally, I am excited to inform you that I am expanding my online presence by incorporating Artificial Intelligence into my business, which will further contribute to its growth and success.
I sincerely appreciate your time and consideration in evaluating my application. If you require any further information or have additional questions, please do not hesitate to reach out. I remain enthusiastic about the possibility of calling [property address] my new home.
Thank you once again for your attention.
Warm regards,
[Jasper
And Again
Hello,
Thank you for your email. I understand your concern about the withdrawals being higher than deposits in most months. I wanted to provide some additional information on my financial situation.
In the past five years, I have worked hard to improve my finances. After my liver transplant, I made consistent payments to reduce my debt, especially the interest payments. This has taught me to rely more on my savings and occasional help from friends, rather than traditional banking methods.
I want to clarify that the bank statements I provided only show a glimpse of my financial activities. I also have additional cash reserves as a safety net for unexpected situations. I kindly request that you don't make assumptions or judgments solely based on the information provided.
During these five years, I have successfully managed to reduce my debt and significantly improve my credit score. It's now above 700, whereas before it was below 600. I have a stable monthly income and diligently manage my expenses. As part of my financial strategy, I occasionally use investments in cryptocurrencies to pay off outstanding debts.
I want to emphasize the privacy of my cryptocurrency accounts and investment portfolio. I value my financial privacy and, like anyone, want to protect my personal information.
In addition to my personal finances, I also own a business that I started from scratch. Although it's been running for only three and a half years, I've been investing in its growth by expanding infrastructure and acquiring necessary equipment. As a result, there may be times when more money goes out than comes in. However, I assure you that I'm actively building a sustainable business model, and my financial records reflect my commitment to long-term success.
I would also like to mention that my business accounts are confidential unless required by a bank or shareholders, of which I currently have none. The income and bank statements attached to this email demonstrate my financial stability and ability to meet my obligations promptly. These documents also show that I can comfortably afford the monthly rent.
With an annual sales figure of over $80,000 through my business, I am confident in my ability to pay a monthly rent of $2,000. I really like your property and believe it would be the perfect space for my work, which mainly involves using my computer, printers, and occasionally meeting clients.
If chosen as a tenant, I am more than willing to sign a lease agreement for one or two years. I am also excited to let you know that I am expanding my online presence by incorporating Artificial Intelligence into my business, which will contribute to its growth and success.
I genuinely appreciate your time and consideration of my application. If you need any further information or have additional questions, please don't hesitate to ask. I am looking forward to the possibility of making [property address] my new home.
Thank you again for your attention.
Warm regards,
[Jasper]
And Again
Hi Shamim,
Hope you're doing well! I wanted to chat about my rental application for [property address]. First off, big thanks for taking the time to go through my financial statements. I totally get your concern about my spending habits and wanted to clear things up.
In the past five years, I've been hustling to improve my financial situation. After my liver transplant, I made it a mission to pay off a ton of debt, especially those pesky interest payments. Now, I'm all about relying on my savings and getting a little help from my friends instead of the traditional banking route.
Now, here's the thing. The bank statements I provided only show a glimpse of my spending habits. I've got some extra cash stashed away, just in case something wild happens like a bank collapse. So, please don't assume or judge everything based solely on what you see there.
Over these past five years, I've gone from being buried in debt with a credit score that was below 600 to nearly kicking it to the curb and boosting my score to above 700! I've got a steady income flow and I'm keeping my expenses in check. As part of my financial strategy, I sometimes dabble in cryptocurrencies to help pay off those lingering debts.
Oh, and let's keep the deets about my crypto investments and accounts hush-hush. Gotta protect my privacy, you know?
Besides my personal finances, I'm also the proud owner of a business that I built from the ground up. It may be relatively young, just three and a half years old, but I've been investing in its growth like crazy. That means sometimes more money goes out than comes in. But don't worry, I'm working hard to keep it all balanced and build a successful business in the long run.
Just so you know, my business accounts are confidential. Only the bank or shareholders, which I don't have at the moment, can get a peek. I've attached my income and bank statements to this email, so you can see that I'm financially stable and fully capable of meeting my obligations. And hey, these documents also show that I can comfortably handle the monthly rent.
With an annual sales figure of over $80,000 through my business, I can confidently say that paying $2,000 in rent each month won't be a problem. I absolutely love your property and can see it as the perfect spot for my work. It's mostly just me, my trusty computer, some printers, and the occasional client meeting.
If you choose me as a tenant, I'm ready to sign a lease agreement for either one or two years. And guess what? I'm also diving into the world of Artificial Intelligence to boost my business even further. So, exciting times ahead!
I really appreciate you taking the time to consider my application. If you need any more info or have any other questions, just let me know. I'm super stoked about the chance to call [property address] my new home.
Thanks again for your attention.
Best regards,
[Jasper]
And Again!
Hello there,
I hope this email finds you in good spirits. I wanted to talk about my rental application for [property address]. First and foremost, I want to express my heartfelt gratitude for taking the time to go through my financial statements. I understand your concerns about my spending habits, and I'm here to provide some clarity.
Over the past five years, I've made great progress in improving my financial situation. After going through a liver transplant, I worked hard to pay off a significant amount of debt, especially those pesky interest payments. This experience has truly shaped how I handle credit now, leading me to rely more on my own savings and occasional support from trusted friends rather than traditional banking methods.
It's important to note that the bank statements I shared with you only scratch the surface of my financial activities. I also have additional cash reserves that act as a safety net for unexpected situations, like if a bank were to collapse. While I appreciate your thoroughness, I kindly ask that you refrain from making assumptions or judgments based solely on the information provided.
During these past five years, I successfully transformed my financial status from being deeply in debt with a credit score below 600 to nearly wiping out my debts and significantly boosting my credit score to over 700. I now have a steady monthly income and actively manage my expenses. As part of my financial strategy, I occasionally invest in cryptocurrencies, which help me pay off outstanding debts.
I hold my cryptocurrency accounts and investment portfolio as private matters. I value my financial privacy just like anyone else and strive to safeguard my personal information.
In addition to managing my personal finances, I'm also the proud owner of a business that I started from scratch. Though it's been incorporated for only three and a half years, I've been steadily investing in its growth by expanding infrastructure and acquiring necessary equipment. Naturally, this means there may be instances where the money flowing out exceeds what's coming in. However, please rest assured that I'm diligently building a sustainable business model, and my financial records reflect my commitment to long-term success.
I want to emphasize that my business accounts are confidential unless required by a bank or shareholders, of which I don't currently have any. To give you a clear picture of my financial stability, I've attached my income and bank statements to this email. These documents demonstrate my ability to comfortably afford the monthly rent and promptly handle my obligations.
Considering my annual sales figure of over $80,000 through my business, I can confidently assure you that paying a monthly rent of $2,000 won't pose any issues. I truly admire your property and envision it as the perfect space for my work, which primarily involves me, my trusty computer, printers, and occasional client meetings.
If you choose me as a tenant, I wholeheartedly commit to signing a lease agreement for one or even two years. Additionally, I'm thrilled to share that I'm expanding my online presence by incorporating Artificial Intelligence into my business, which will undoubtedly contribute to its growth and success.
I genuinely appreciate your time and consideration in evaluating my application. If you require any further information or have additional questions, please feel free to reach out to me. I'm truly excited about the possibility of calling [property address] my new home.
Thank you once again for your attention.
[Jasper]
AND AGAIN!!!
Warm regards,
I hope this email finds you in good health. I'm reaching out to discuss my rental application for [property address]. First, let me express my gratitude for taking the time to thoroughly review my financial statements. I understand your concerns about my spending habits and would like to provide some clarification.
Over the past five years, I have made significant progress in improving my financial situation. After undergoing a liver transplant, I worked hard to pay off a significant amount of debt, particularly interest payments. This experience has shaped how I approach credit, leading me to rely more on my savings and occasional help from trusted friends rather than traditional banking methods.
It's important to note that the provided bank statements only offer a glimpse into my financial activities. I also hold additional cash reserves as a safety net for unexpected circumstances, such as a bank collapse. While I appreciate your thoroughness, I kindly request that you refrain from making assumptions or judgments solely based on the information provided.
During these past five years, I have successfully transitioned from being deeply in debt with a credit score below 600 to almost eliminating my debts and significantly improving my credit score, which now stands above 700. I have a stable monthly income and actively manage my expenses. As part of my financial strategy, I occasionally invest in cryptocurrencies to help pay off outstanding debts.
Please understand that my cryptocurrency accounts and investment portfolio are private matters. I value my financial privacy and strive to protect my personal information, just like anyone else.
In addition to my personal finances, I am also the owner of a business that I started from scratch. Although it has only been incorporated for three and a half years, I have been steadily investing in its growth by expanding infrastructure and acquiring necessary equipment. As a result, there may be instances where the funds flowing out exceed those coming in. However, rest assured that I am actively building a sustainable business model, and my financial records reflect my commitment to long-term success.
I would like to emphasize that my business accounts are confidential unless required by a bank or shareholders, of which I currently have none. The attached income and bank statements demonstrate my financial stability and ability to fulfill my obligations promptly. These documents also highlight my ability to comfortably afford the monthly rent.
With an annual sales figure of over $80,000 through my business, I can confidently assure you that paying a monthly rent of $2,000 won't pose any issues. I truly admire your property and believe it would be the perfect space for my work, which primarily involves me, my computer, printers, and occasional client meetings.
If selected as a tenant, I am more than willing to sign a lease agreement for one or even two years. Additionally, I am excited to share that I am expanding my online presence by incorporating Artificial Intelligence into my business, which will contribute to its growth and success.
I sincerely appreciate your time and consideration in evaluating my application. If you require any further information or have additional questions, please don't hesitate to reach out. I remain enthusiastic about the possibility of making [property address] my new home.
Thank you once again for your attention.
Warm regards,
[Jasper]
THE RESULTS ARE IN!!! WINNER!
My Reply
(AI need some assistance, too!)
Make of it what you will, most of the AI replies were pretty a'right.
"Thank for reading!"
-Shiner The Human, Lex AI, and Jasper AI
Stay tuned for the conclusion: The Result of the Email
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